准备出国留学的申请材料的时候，大家需要认真的确认自己的能力优势，然后进行个人陈述的撰写。和留学群来一起看看出国留学个人陈述写作能不能参考范文？
范文（一）
Pick up any newspaper today and you can find many headlines related to stories about economic problems and trends. I am always deeply absorbed in the economic news， especially in the analysis and description of the capital markets.
I was born in XX City， a large city with lots of heavy industry companies. My father is an engineer in a shipbuilding institute and my mother is a technician in an electronic apparatus factory. Since I was very young， they began to teach me plenty of knowledge of natural science and hoped me to become an engineer like them one day. But they changed their mind when they find me interested in the field of economics， an absolutely different area they were not familiar with. They agreed to send me to XXX Finance and Economic University which has been ranked in the top ten in my country by commerce & economics.
In the year of 2000， I entered the faculty of Investing Economy of that university and started my four-year strict education. In the first two years， I laid more emphasis on the basic theories， such as models in economics and investing. Later in my 3rd and 4th semesters， I found that lacking of practice became a bottle neck of further studying. Fortunately， my graduated thesis tutor， Professor XXX and Teacher XXX provided me some good opportunities to practice in the Company of Nahu Real Estate and Sanxia Securities Company， in which I lived a substantial and pleasing time. Besides my major， computer science is my anther interest. In the last year of my university， I was certified with MCSE（Microsoft Certified System Engineer） and got a part time teaching job in Richinfo Teaching Center， which largely increased my communication abilities. When I finished my graduated thesis， I got the Bachelor’s Degree of Economics successfully in July 2000.
On the day of 28 September 2004， I began my career in the accounting and funding department of Beijing XXX Company and was assigned the duty of investing. My company usually got irregular cash flows so lots of money was left unused. At first I followed my workmate， Mr. XX， a senior staff in my department and put only a little fund in the securities market. The initial success was a great encouragement to me and I began to invest more. 2002 was a golden year for me though the whole market was not good. In that year I admit 90，000 shares of the stock--Sea Oil Project and 50，000 shares of stock-Da Sha in thier Initial Public Offering and sell them in the same year. That brought us 1，100，000￥ profits before taxation and my work results was highly confirmed by the general manager and other colleagues. The luck continued to the first half year of 2003 until the stagnancy of the whole stock market in July. Now I am directly led by the general manager and do some management and marketing work as well.
The four years of working matured me rapidly not only in technique skills but also in abilities of communication and cooperation with colleagues and other person. With the opening policy of China’s Capital Market， I realize internationalization is a trend I must make good preparations for. So I determined to go abroad to go on further learning about financial knowledge and improved my English skills and the course of master of finance will be my best choice..
Socialising is very important to me， and I am always keen to meet new people. I enjoy trying new culture and new foods. My good culinary skills will prove very useful to the daily life of my future foreign studying. I enjoy traveling and learning about modern history. Music is one of my biggest hobbies， and I use music to help me unwind and reflect on things. I use the internet to keep up with current affairs and sports news.
I have always been a keen sportsman， representing my school of basketball competition many times and now I often play it in the evening. I also enjoy playing tennis and table tennis， as well as football.
I believe that I have made sufficient preparations for a new university life. My skills together with my ambition to succeed prove me to be good candidate for your master degree..
Applicant： XXXX
范文（二）
Personal Statement
My great curiosity about camera lens is rooted in a television interview when I was still a young girl. Hunan Television Station held a talent show called Super Girl Voice in 2004. I was a student in high school at that time， and I found the high audience rating brought huge viewers and the advertisers. It also made mass media to be a hot industry. I thought that was a potential job which would provide opportunities； prospects and material conditions for me to take off. Therefore I determined to choose mass communication to be my major.
I am very proud to study in Communication University of China Nanjing College， which is the tiptop communication and media institution of higher education in China. During my undergraduate study， I find myself has been strongly attached to this specific territory. Achieving 82 of the GPA proved that I am an excellent student in my class. I learned basic methodology and theories of Broadcasting and TV program Editor and mass communication. There is no doubt that practice makes perfect. For that reason I have applied for my professional internship as a TV editor in Yueyang Broadcasting & Television Co. Ltd， which is the largest and most authoritative media company in Yueyang. During that intern work I applied what I acknowledged at school to actual process of producing television program， which includes programme scheming， transcribe programme， editing and broadcasting.
Writing scripts and shooting films with my classmates is also my favourite. During the creation process， we exchanged our ideas and discussed about the problems of scripts， performing and postproduction is benefit from my strong sense of team work. Being a member of the university’s volleyball team instill the idea of ‘team work’ deep inside me. That is the very spirit which made my short film ‘timeline’， a cooperated film work， won the 3rd rate prize of ‘the 5th International Film Work Selection Practice’. No pain no gain！
Emerging technologies is rapidly changing the media map. Internet， wireless communications and digital video technology are creating a new communications environment. Our world is becoming a earth village gradually which metioned by Canadian professor Marshall McLuhan first time in his in 1967. With the recent tendency of globalization， I wish to pursue my study in media communication. To find out how the methods and perspectives of media communication affect the ultimate communication effects and what global media can do to serve their social responsibility better under a globalization circumstances.
The reason why I choose UK is because I am crazy about English TV drama Like ，， and so on. I am also enthusiastic about football very much and I want to watch the FA Premier League. I choose UK because UK is the media center of European. I can learn a lot of knowledge which I cannot acquire in China and broaden my horizon at the same time. There is an old saying in China： Reading over ten thousands of books is not as good as walking over ten thousands of miles. I will be influenced by many different cultures in UK.
At present， my career ideal is clear in my mind. In order to combine my own career objective with social development and accommodate a wide variety of interdisciplinary knowledge， I will comprehensively study the interactive relationship between mass media and human civilization. That’s the objective law and trends. I pick up this programme with the most advanced research facilities and world-class faculty， to upgrade my knowledge of scientific research methods. And even when I type my Statement of Purpose word by word， I became even more determined with my choice. It’s quite convincible that my solid technical background will help me to understand more clearly the internal operation of the media communication. My adequate internship experiences will prepare me to be easily integrated into the media market as well. Equally， I’m certain that with your wonderful guidance I will play a better part in contribution to China’s media industry and add luster to my career.
In the past three years， though sometimes I suffered setbacks， felt confused or dissatisfied with the reality like a rebellious youth， I have never stopped the pursuit of my interests and all-round development of myself. Modern undergraduate education focuses on the expansion of students’ major knowledge. As the world changing rapidly， only the all-rounders can best adapt to the global society. In this active atmosphere around our campus， I definitely seize the opportunities to cultivate the makings of being a media people.
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