2012高考-如何写出英语作文得分的“亮点”

如何写出英语作文得分的“亮点”

以下几种手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法,也是得高分的“亮点”。

　　1. 改变句子的开头方式,不是一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词作状语等。试比较:

　　(原文) My brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle the other day.

　　(修正) The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle.

　　(原文) The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.

　　(修正) Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.

　　2. 在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、倒装句、省略句等。例如:

　　(1)强调句

　　(原文) The dog has saved my little sister bravely.

　　(修正) It is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely.

　　(2)主从复合句

　　(原文) We had to stand there to catch the offender.

　　(修正) What we had to do was to stand there, trying to catch the offender.

　　(3)分词短语、由with或without引导的短语

　　(原文) The driver escaped and didn’t stop, he left the old man lying on the road.

　　(修正) The driver escaped without stopping, leaving the old man lying on the road.

　　(4)倒装句

　　(原文) I went to bed at 11:30.

　　(修正) Not until 11:30 did I go to bed.

　　(5)省略句

　　(原文) While you are crossing the street, you should be careful.

　　(修正) While crossing the street, you should be careful.

　　3. 通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。例如:

　　(原文) He stopped us an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.

　　(修正) He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.

　　(原文) We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced.

　　(修正) After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing.

　　4. 注意连接词与句子的运用。

　　以2001年

　　5. 使用过渡词语。

　　写好了每个句子,并不一定就是一篇

　　并列递进:and, also, as well as, besides, what’s more, furthermore, moreover, etc.

　　转折:but, yet, however, although, nevertheless, in spite of, after all, etc.

　　因果:because, as, for, since, for this reason, because of, so, therefore, thus, as a result, etc.

　　对比:or, otherwise, like, unlike, on the contrary, while, on the other hand, instead of, etc.

　　总结:in all, in brief, on the whole, in short, in general, in one word, etc.　

高考英语作文模板：议论文的框架
(1) 不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ）
　There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion

 concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In 

their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____. 
　　People,　however,　differ　in　their　opinions　on　this　matter.　Some　people　hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______.  On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there　is no　doubt　that ___观点二______.　 
　As far as I am concerned, I　firmly　support　the　view　that __观点一或二______.　It　is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________. 

advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are 

several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______.  And secondly ___优点二_____. 
Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another 

word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition,  ____缺点二______. 
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce

 the disadvantagesto the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
( 3 ) 答题性议论文
   Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really an important 

concern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.
   As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一______. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.
   Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various

 ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.

 our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series 

of examples as follows. ( also theoretically )
    A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance

 to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.
    With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance 

of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..