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托福作文备考:托福写作话题(5)

03-13

 

  【第五天】

  A company has announced that it wishes to builda large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantagesof this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory?Explain your position.

   参考分析:

  先讨论“假设工厂真的落成了,而带来的好处和坏处”,而后发表看法。

  好处:

  1.直接增加了就业机会(到工厂去上班);间接增加了就业机会(会有很多服务业,比如饭店、商店、超市等等跟着开业)

  2.如果工厂规模足够大,物流规模也足够大,那么将最终成为交通改善的起点

  3.大的工厂可以缴纳很多税,对地方财政有好处,进而促进社区的繁荣

  坏处:

  带来各种污染,比如,噪音、废气、污水等等

  5.工厂不一定会赢利

  先说明优势和劣势,让后说同意建一个工厂

  (1)工厂能够吸收附近很多人进行就业,对地方的经济有很大的贡献

  (2)建立工厂能够促使附近其他的商业发展,例如小商店,药店等等,这可以大大方便附近的居民

  (3)建造工厂,赢利后,就可以向当地政府贡献税收,政府可以利用这些钱改善社区的服务

  相关题目:[16]、[25]、[26]、[30]、[79]

  【Topic 5 A factory in your community】

  As the company has announced to build afactory right here in our community, I am so eager to(非常迫切)say a few words toward thisissue. I really think that if the plan is carried out in the near feature finally, there will be much more disadvantages than advantages to be brought tothequality life of our social community.(作者给出了否定的观点,通过上下文我们感受到作者的心情时比较急切的)

  Of course, during these years' highunemployment rate(高失业率), introducingof such a large factory will consume unemployed workforce in some respects(在某些方面). A family may increase theirincome by taking account of(考虑到)its new employed father during or after thecon...

托福作文备考:托福写作话题(4)

03-13

 

  【第四天】

  It has been said, "Not everything that islearned is contained in books." Compare andcontrast knowledge gained fromexperience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source ismore important? Why?

  参考分析:

  注意一定要先进行比较

  从书本中获取的知识

   优点:

  题材、范围更多

  有更多的深度

  更加的系统

   缺点:

  有时过于教条

  也不见得完全准确

  从经验中获取的知识

  优点:

  获取直接、简单明了

  更加地实用

  有些知识无法从书本中获得

   缺点:

  不系统,很大的随意性

  很容易产生片面理解

  不一定要说A比B更重要,或者B比A更重要。也可以选择在不同的情况下,有不同的比较。学习抽象的知识,书本是最好的来源。学习游泳,这只能靠经验。另外,大多数的知识要书本经验相结合才可以。

  相关题目:[116]

  有些科目或者知识适合通过实践学习,比如,语言,体育

  有些科目或者知识适合通过阅读学习,比如,物理、化学、历史、地理

  有些科目或者知识适合通过与别人交流来学习,比如销售技巧;管理技巧

  所以不能一概而论(treat differentthings/problems/matters] as the same),要看学什么,以及学习的阶段。

   4、首先进行比较,然后说书是最重要的来源

  (1)读书能够节省很多时间

  (2)书是有系统性的,能够让人以很科学的方式迅速获得知识

  (3)读书相对比较便宜和容易,而在寻找经验则比较昂贵和困难

  【Topic 4Books and experience】

  Books are considered to be the source ofall knowledge, but all that one learns through a book is only of

  theoreticalnature in the form of ideas and concepts. It is essential to utilize(利用,别再说use啦)them

  in a real environment andexperience the knowledge that is learned from books.(作者给的...

托福作文备考:托福写作话题(3)

03-13

 

  【第三天】

  Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examplesto support your answer.

  参考分析:

  总体上,“食物变得越来越容易准备”是一种进步[37],所以自然会带来improvement。使人们的生活方式发生了一些变化:

  好的:

  节省时间,越来越方便,一定程度上把妇女从繁杂的家务中解放了出来

  也有不好的变化:

  准备食物是一种重要的家庭活动,可是食物变得容易准备一定程度上使家人在一起的时间减少了,比如“速冻饺子”[quick-frozen dumpling]

  快餐业的高速发展的一个直接结果是,人们普遍变胖了,尤其是孩子

  相关题目:[13]

  3、食品容易保存将改变人们的生活习惯

  (1)食品容易准备,节省了大量的时间,使人们可以做其他事情

  (2)食品容易准备,为人们提供了更多的花样。

  (3)食品容易准备,为人们的健康带来了很多好处

  【精选例文讲解

  Topic 3 Has the easiness of cookingimproved life?

  Food has always been the one of thegreatest wants of humankind. It has influenced almost every step that humankindhas taken. The search for food is the essence(本质,实质)of life. Therefore if food is easier to get and prepare it is a realboon(有喝倒彩的意思,理解起来就是贬义)tohumankind.(本段开门见山,没有多着笔墨,依旧是叙述一个常态,给出一个观点)

  Food is the most important of the threebasic amenities(令人愉快的事物,注意one of后面一定是复数)of life (water, food and shelter(庇护)). Though it can be argued that water is thesustenance(食物)for any life form, food is more important because if you do not havewater you will surely die. But if you are left with a scarcity(缺乏)of food it will lead to a very sickly and torturous life(虚弱和痛苦的生活). Nutritious food is very essential for life, food has been thecause of many a battl...

托福作文备考:托福写作话题(2)

03-13

 

  【第二天】托福独立写作

  1. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Usespecific reasons and examples to support your answer.

  参考分析:

  因观点绝对而不能同意。

  • 不是所有的父母都是好老师

  • 最好的老师不仅仅是父母

  • 有些父母尽管善良,但对教育孩子一无所知

  • 有些父母不配做孩子的老师,对孩子有不良影响

  2、同意父母是最好的老师

  (1)父母从小就和我们在一起,给我们很多的知识

  (2)父母和我们最为亲密,在任何时候,都会毫无保留地给我们知识

  (3)父母最了解我们,所以他们给我们的建议和意见都是最有针对性的

   精选例文讲解

  Topic 2 Are parents best teachers?

  Obviously, the first teachers we have in our lives in most cases are our parents. They teach us to walk, to speak,and to have good manners before we reach “the real world. ” More than even theprofessional teachers that we have at school, parents are generally(通常是)the most involved in the development and education of children.(本文章开门见山,直接提出观点,并讲述一个既定存在的事实,父母是参与我们人生中发展和教育最多的人)

  Almost for sure(毫无疑问的)our parents are the best teachers at the beginning of our lives, which actually corresponds to the parents' role in nature(本质上,事实上). Parents are mostcommitted(承担义务的,也可以说有责任的)and involved in(从事,涉及)teaching their children; they have a kind of instinct(天性,本能)to sacrifice a part of themselves for the betterment of their children. They love us and have great patience while passing down their knowledge(就是所谓的传道授业解惑)to us. They wish us a success and thus will not teach us bad things.And o...

托福作文备考:托福写作话题(1)

03-13

 

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    The Independent Writing Topics

  The following is a list of the actual IndependentWriting topics that were eligible for use on former versions of the TOEFL test.You will see topics very similar to these on the TOEFL iBT. Whatever the topic,you will be askedto give your opinion and to support your opinion with specific reasons and examples. It does not matter whetheryou agree or disagree with the topic; theraters aretrained to accept all varieties of opinions.Whatmatters arethe skills discussed in the previous section: your abilityto responddirectly to the question, to take a clear position, and to write anessay characterized by good organization, proper use of supporting examples,sentence variety, and correct sentence structures.None of the topics requires specialized knowledge.Most topics are general and are based on the common experience of people ingeneral and students in particular. What should you do with this list oftopics? To prepare for the Writing section of TOEFL iBT, you should choosetopics from the list andpractice writing essays inresponse. Make sure you time yourself, taking 30 seconds to read thequestion, plan your work, and write your essay. After completing the essay,read it over and compare it with the scoring guide. Or better yet, have afriend or teacher evaluate the essay against the scoring criteria ...

托福作文备考:托福写作的万用句式

03-13

 

  托福写作是一句句拼凑起来的,那词穷或者句子穷的我们该如何逃过托福写作的魔抓呢?话说有托福写作万能套用句式,可以简单搞定托福写作,以下是小编分享的5大托福写作万能句式,考生可根据自己的情况选择其中的1-2个,做到能够熟练正确地仿写、套用。

  托福写作万能句式1、表示原因

  1)There are three reasons for this.

  2)The reasons for this are as follows.

  3)The reason for this is obvious.

  4)The reason for this is not far to seek.

  5)The reason for this is that...

  例如: There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,peoples living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.

  托福写作万能句式2、表示好处

  1)It has the following advantages.

  2)It does us a lot of good.

  3)It benefits us quite a lot.

  4)It is beneficial to us.

  5)It is of great benefit to us.

  例如: Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.

  托福写作万能句式3、表示坏处

  1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.

  2)It does us much harm.

  3)It is harmfulto us.

  例如:However,everything dividesinto two.Television can also

  托福写作万能句式4、表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能

  1)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient,possible)for sb.to do sth.

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