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1) 加上姓名、时间、地点等
很多中国学生在写例子的时候会使用"比如说有一个人……"这样的表达。这样的表达看起来底气不足,且中式思维严重,很难受到考官青睐。考生完全可以改用另外的表达"我有一个朋友叫Jason,他在两年前做了XX事……"这样写就看起来舒服多了。在叙述个人类例子的时候,尽量使用具体的人名、地名和时间。这样能使你的例子看上去更丰满、富有细节,也更像真实的事件,有说服力。
2) 与论点结合,写出XX之前和XX之后的变化
需要特别注意的是,例子一定是为论证服务的,绝不能脱离主题举例子。有的考生非常心醉于自己编出来的故事,但是却忘了自己在写托福作文,这个故事并不能证明你的观点,那这样的文章得不到高分一点也不奇怪。
这里的XX指的是论点中的主题词。例如在写机经中的一个题目:公共交通是否应该免费时,有一个分论点是公共交通免费以后,私家车会减少,这样尾气排放得少了,环境也就变好了。这里的主题词就是私家车的数量,例子就可以写成N年前私家车很少,环境很好,然后私家车变多以后,环境就变差了。例子可写成:
10 years ago, in my childhood memory, the city which I live in now is one of the most beautiful cities I have ever seen. The blue sky and the clean water were quite impressive to me. However, 3 years ago, when I came back to this city again, I was astonished by those changes. The city developed rapidly during those days. There are far more private cars than years ago on the road every day. On average, every household has one or two cars. The city may be described as "developed" now, while the sky here is never as clear as ever.
这个例子当中所用的词汇、句型基本都是中学所学过的。但是其中用到了我们刚才所谈的第一个技巧,加上了时间细节,也用到了第二个技巧,扣紧了主题,说明了有私家车变多之前和之后的变化。这个例子看上去文采平实,但却符合托福考试的评分规范,单就这个例子而言,就是可以得到4~5分的高分的(满分5分)。
3) 写完例子以后,一定要再结合论点论证说理
这一点不难理解,却是很多考生所忽视的。再强调一遍,例子的存在是为了更好地论证论点,因此在写完例子以后,需要再加上至少1~2句话重申一下你的论点。例如上文中出现的例子,写完之后,还应再加上If the amount of the cars can ...
什么样的句型才能在托福写作中得到高分呢? 怎样做到句型丰富呢?通过不断地归纳和总结,下面留学群托福作文栏目小编将这些句型介绍给大家。
开头:
When it comes to..., some think...
There is a public debate today that...
A is a common way of..., but is it a wise one?
Recently the problem has been brought.
提出观点:
Now there is a growing awareness that...
It is time we explore the truth of...
Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible.
进一步提出观点:
...but that is the only part of the history.
Another equally important aspect is...
A is but one of the many effects. Another is...
Besides, other reasons are...
提出假想例子的方式:
Suppose that...
Just imagine what would be like if...
It is reasonable to expect...
It is not surprising that...
举普通例子:
For example(instance),...
... such as A,B,C and so on (so forth)
A good case in point is...
A particular example for this is...
引用:
One of the greatest early writers said ...
"Knowledge is power", such is the remark of ...
"...". That is how sb comment ( criticize/ praise...).
"...". How often we hear such words like there.
讲故事(先说故事主体),this story is not rare
..., such dilemma we often meet in daily life
..., the story still has a realistic significance.
提出原因:
There are many reas...
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