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新托福写作素材：学生兼职的益处
Although taking a part-time job while pursuing a degree is hard work, it has become a necessity for many students due to the rising costs associated with obtaining a higher education. However, for most students, the benefits of a part-time job are typically greater than the amount of a paycheck, which they use to cover their living and academic expenses. In general, taking a part-time job is a great way to attain first-hand, introductory experiences of working in the real world and of networking with other people, as opposed to the solitary pursuits involved in studying. Also, students who work during their studies are more likely to master better time-management skills than their counterparts because they have to measure out their time to make sure they can complete every task before its deadline. After students graduate, their workplace experiences would be attractive to their future employers because they are more accustomed to the professional world and would require a shorter transition period.
托福写作词汇积累
① pursue 追寻、从事
=go after
✎ pursue a higher education/happiness
② as opposed to 与…相反
=different from, in contrast to
③ measure out 计算出
✎ measure out the distance between … and …
③ Although ..., 尽管
Although building a f...
八月的托福考试马上就要开始了，关于托福写作，同学们可以在考前再看看范文之类的加强记忆，留学群托福栏目为大家带来托福写作之优先工作还是平行工作，希望能帮到大家!
托福写作之优先工作还是平行工作
Some people think that it is better to finish a project completely and then do another project than do two or more projects at the same time，do you agree or disagree? 有人认为优先完成一项任务要比同时完成两项或者多项任务要好，是否认同?
作家立场：优先工作优越于平行工作。
解析：A is superior B ……优越于……
【导言】
毛主席说：集中优势兵力，各个歼灭敌人，以消灭敌人的有生力量为主。伤其十指，不如断其一指。
我在学习法语的时候，经常无法区分一些代词的用法，抬头望窗外，天是亮的，再抬起头时，天色已接近黄昏，而自己好像什么都没有学透，很有挫败感。我后来的策略是每天利用数本书籍学习只学习一个关系代词的用法，和做大量练习，看起来好像是很费时，但是，我却可以学习透彻，自信满满。
郭靖知道自己很笨，就练笨功夫，最后也能成为武学的宗师，靠的是专注和执着。
【思路拓展】
优先工作的利好：
1. 人的精力和时间是有限的，无论学习和工作，我们追求应该是勤奋高效。广泛涉猎，难免蜻蜓点水，集中优势的精力，完成一项手边的任务，才能提高工作的效率，增加内心的成就感。例如，很多创业企业家的事业都是靠着点滴积累，将企业发展的宏观战略分解成为一个个小的目标，慢慢实现了企业的持续发展和盈利。
2. 当完美地完成一项工作的时候，心灵的成就感同时可以增强做接下来的工作的信心，这种信心会帮助形一种在工作方面良性的循环，进而激发一个人做其他事情的热情。对比的是，如果两项或者多项的工作一起来做的，难免会降低效率，或互相影响， 尤其是两项工作没有必然的相互的联系的时候。例如，我在复习托福考试的过程中，我的感受是单项学习要比多项学习的效果更佳。
平行工作的利好：用于让步段
有时候，在特殊的情况特殊(比如时效性)，很难去集中精力做一项工作，两项或者多项工作必须同时进行，这才可以保障工作计划的按时的完成，这时候，两个项目一起做不是没有道理。例如，作为讲师，有时候，在一天内我必须同时完成教学备课和原创范文写作两项工作。但是，我想反驳的是，大多数情况下，人们还是应该集中精力完成一项工作，再继续接下来的工作。
【原创语料库】
1. What we should pursue is industriousness and efficiency 我们应该追求的是勤奋和高效。
拓展：industrious = diligent = hard-working adj 勤奋的
解析：pursue v追求(抽象名词)
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托福写作主要考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握，以及逻辑和结构构架能力，一篇好的托福写作范文能够帮助同学们抓住托福写作的得分点，并能给大家提供提供高分词汇和句式。下吗，我们就来看一篇托福写作范文：家附近的电影院。
题目：It has recently been announced that a new movies theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
范文：Some people will say that a new movie theater in our neighborhood would be a bad thing. However, I fully support the plan to build one. I feel that a movie theater would bring more opportunities for recreation, reduce teenage delinquency, and lead to several improvements in the town.
As it stands, there is little to do in my town. There are no parks here, and there is certainly no nightlife. Additionally, the nearest movies theater is more than thirty minutes away. That is inconvenient for everyone here. Many movies end late at night. Who want to a long drive home at 11:30 p.m. or midnight?
Building a new movie theater here will reduce juvenile delinquency, Like everyone else, teens here are bored. They need activities to keep them busy and out of trouble. The jobs that the theatre will provide will help teens, too. We need more businesses that are willing and eager to employ young people.
Overall, the new theater will bring many improvements to the town, For example, it will help other businesses. That is because the movie theater will attract customers from neighboring towns. Those neighbors do not have a reason to come to this town n...
04-16
托福写作主要考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握，以及逻辑和结构构架能力，一篇好的托福写作范文能够帮助同学们抓住托福写作的得分点，并能给大家提供提供高分词汇和句式。下吗，我们就来看一篇托福写作范文：是否该做不喜欢的事。
【托福作文题目】
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
【托福作文范文】
Doing Things We Don't Enjoy
Everyone has certain likes and dislikes, and there is no denying that we all prefer to do the things that we like. However, sometimes doing things we don't enjoy can be beneficial for us, and sometimes it is necessary. Therefore, I agree that people should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy.
One reason is that some of the things that we don't enjoy are good for us. For example, not everyone likes to exercise, but exercise is good for our health and so we should all do it anyway. Likewise, not many people enjoy going to see a dentist or a doctor, but it is good for us to take care of ourselves, so we should all visit dentists and doctors regularly for a checkup. Another reason is that, at times, the things we dislike are necessary. Students must take tests insgroupsto complete their studies, and everyone must work insgroupsto make a living. And finally, doing things we dislike can also open up new...
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写一篇托福作文就如同做一盘菜，如何要将其做的色香味俱全，就靠厨子的功夫了。参考老师提出的三个“万能理由”：Career preparation/increase knowledge/new experiences以及分为10类的“万金油”：健康和安全、便利、经济、交流 、幸福和情感、成功、环保、品格、科技、教育与培训、国家与文明，这十类几乎涵盖了我们在进行文章论述时所能涉及的全部范围。所以如果能够将这些““万金油””用好，用熟，就能达到事半功倍的效果。
“万金油”是油，要用，还要活用
在托福考试时，首先是时间紧。要在半小时内完成400字左右的文章;其次，在很短时间内要根据题目想出几条支持自己论点的理由，并将其有序地组织起来，构成文章，而且还要做到语言地道。所以考生很容易手忙脚乱。所以为了避免这种情况的发生，让考生在短时间内完成一篇高质量的文章，把这盘菜做好，就需要“万金油”出场了。
要做菜，油是必不可少的。同样，在托福作文中，也一定会用到““万金油””。用的时候切忌生搬硬套，要灵活运用。
在有限的时间内，在确立了我们要写的中心论点之后，就要想出几个分论点，这时可以通过“万金油”来帮助我们节省时间，迅速定位，快速进入写作状态。
比如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, people are putting too much emphasis on appearance and fashion. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer。
解这道题目，首先从自己出发，怎么好写，怎么容易写，去确定自己的中心论点。假如从disagree 的角度出发，要从哪几个分论点去论述人们并没有对外表和时尚putting too much emphasis 呢?
考生在现场可能会抓耳挠腮，一时不知从何下手，这时我们可以借助老师的10个分类“万金油”去一一验证。
首先，可以从适用范围最广的三个万能理由去分析可行不可行：Career preparation/increase knowledge/new experiences。
对时尚外表的关注可以帮助我们的Career preparation——事业成功吗?——成功 ，也就是十类中的“成功”。
答案是可以!注重外表，关注时尚反映一个人的生活品味，个人气质会提升，进而引起人们的关注，这自然会为自己带来意想不到的工作机会，进而发展自己的事业。你可以举例，XX就是因为平常对时尚的关注，注重外表，气质好，给人印象深刻，而在面试中脱颖而出，成功地得到一份好的工作。
接下来从其他十个分类中，进行快速定位，寻找分论点。国家与文明， 国家的范畴很大，可以展开论述。就其中的公益和慈善方面，可以举例。由于人们以时尚的关注，还能帮助他人，比如最近的“犀利哥事件”，从一个普通的流浪乞丐，因为其与众不同的穿着打扮，引起人们的关注，进而帮助他与家人团聚，唤起了人们对弱势群体的关注，进而促进了社会和谐。
第三个“健康和安全”也能用，可以说人们对时尚外表的关注，自然会崇尚健康的护肤产品，保养品，要注意保持身材，就会关注健身，要...
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托福写作范文：托福写作时间长，题量大，考察方面广泛，很多中国考生都因为没有更好的训练方法而发愁。其实，考生在托福写作的练习过程中，应该多找几篇托福写作范文，熟悉托福写作的出题模式，了解托福作文的构架方式和逻辑方向。下面，我们来欣赏一篇题目为“是否愿意独自旅行”的托福写作范文。
Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Traveling alone is the only way to travel. If you take someone with you， you take your home with you. When you travel alone， you meet new people， have new experiences， and learn more about yourself.
When I traveled with my friend， I spend all my time with that friend. We eat together and sightsee together. When I travel alone， I spend my time looking for new friends. It is easy to fine other people， either other tourists or locals， to eat with or have a coffee with. When you share meals with strangers， they become friends.
When I travel with a friend， my routine is predictable. We maintain the same schedule that we do at home. When I travel alone， I adopt the rhythm of the place I visit. I might take a nap in the afternoon and eat dinner at 11 pm. I might go to a disco and dance all night.
When I travel with a friend， we know how we will react to things. When I travel alone， each new experience requires a new reaction. If I don’t try new things， I won’t be able to decide if I like something or not. Shall I ride an ostr...
03-15
托福写作主要考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握，以及逻辑和结构构架能力，一篇好的托福写作范文能够帮助同学们抓住托福写作的得分点，并能给大家提供提供高分词汇和句式。下吗，我们就来看一篇托福写作范文：children’s numerical skills。
People appear to born to compute. The numerical skills of children develop so early and so inexorably that it is easy to imagine an internal clock of mathematical maturity guiding their growth. Not long after learning to walk and talk, they can set the table with impress accuracy---one knife, one spoon, one fork, for each of the five chairs.
Soon they are capable of nothing that they have placed five knives, spoons and forks on the table and, a bit later, that this amounts to fifteen pieces of silverware. Having thus mastered addition, they move on to subtraction. It seems almost reasonable to expect that if a child were secluded on a desert island at birth and retrieved seven years later, he or she could enter a second enter a second-grade mathematics class without any serious problems of intellectual adjustment.
Of course, the truth is not so simple. This century, the work of cognitive psychologists has illuminated the subtle forms of daily learning on which intellectual progress depends. Children were observed as they slowly grasped-----or, as the case might be, bumped into----- concepts that adults take for quantity is unchanged as water pours from a short glass into a tall thin one. Psychologists have s...
03-15
托福写作主要考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握，以及逻辑和结构构架能力，一篇好的托福写作范文能够帮助同学们抓住托福写作的得分点，并能给大家提供提供高分词汇和句式。下吗，我们就来看一篇托福写作范文：stay in village VS going out。
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People who move out of their native villages or towns are more successful and happier than people who stay in their native villages or towns.
Sample answer
Some people maintain that only by traveling beyond one’s hometown can one gain success and happiness, while others hold the opposite view, asserting that living in one’s village is more comfortable and enjoyable. These perspectives reflect differences of lifestyle. In my view, one cannot claim that those who choose to leave their home villages are more successful and happier than those who choose to remain. There are ways for people who choose to live in villages to achieve success.
Due to the high speed of development and the opportunities in urban areas, it is often easier to achieve success by moving to a big city. Take Beijing, for example. There are many companies in Beijing, especially international companies; therefore, people in Beijing have greater access to materials and information provided by these big companies, as well as more opportunities to work in them compared to those who live in villages.
However, merely possessing more information and materials does not necessarily mean achieving success; there are definitely other factors that contribute to this outcome. His...
03-15
托福写作主要考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握，以及逻辑和结构构架能力，一篇好的托福写作范文能够帮助同学们抓住托福写作的得分点，并能给大家提供提供高分词汇和句式。下吗，我们就来看一篇托福写作范文：Modern American Universities。
Before the 1850’s, the United States had a number of small colleges, most of them dating from colonial days. They were small, church connected institutions whose primary concern was to shape the moral character of their students.
Throughout Europe, institutions of higher learning had developed, bearing the ancient name of university. In German university was concerned primarily with creating and spreading knowledge, not morals. Between mid-century and the end of the 1800’s, more than nine thousand young Americans, dissatisfied with their training at home, went to Germany for advanced study. Some of them return to become presidents of venerable colleges-----Harvard, Yale, Columbia---and transform them into modern universities. The new presidents broke all ties with the churches and brought in a new kind of faculty. Professors were hired for their knowledge of a subject, not because they were of the proper faith and had a strong arm for disciplining students. The new principle was that a university was to create knowledge as well as pass it on, and this called for a faculty composed of teacher-scholars. Drilling and learning by rote were replaced by the German method of lecturing, in which the professor’s own research was presented in class. Graduate training leading to the Ph.D., an ancient German degree signifying the ...
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托福写作最给力的5种表达句型：托福写作中有一些使用率很高的基本句式，考生可以积累下来，以节省考场思考时间，增加文章的正确率。本文中每组句式的功能相同或相似，考生们可以根据自己的实际情况选择其中的几个合适的句型，做到能够熟练正确地仿写或套用。下面我们一起来看看这些托福写作中经常会遇到的五种实用句型。
托福写作句型1、表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this.
2)The reasons for this are as follows.
3)The reason for this is obvious.
4)The reason for this is not far to seek.
5)The reason for this is that...
例如： There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,peoples living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.
托福写作句型2、表示好处
1)It has the following advantages.
2)It does us a lot of good.
3)It benefits us quite a lot.
4)It is beneficial to us.
5)It is of great benefit to us.
例如： Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
托福写作句型3、表示坏处
1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.
2)It does us much harm.
3)It is harmfulto us.
例如：However,everything dividesinto two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching televi- sion.
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