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2021年考研英语：备考作文的拓展解析
两篇看起来大同小异的大作文，为什么一篇老师打了19分，而另一篇只给了15分?
知道这四分之差意味着什么?意味着阅读错了两道题(2道题*2分)，意味着完型错了八道题(8道题*0.5分)
而复习这些题你又需要花费多少时间才能提高这个分数呢?
每一分都很重要，听专家的，快速提升主观题成绩，让成功来的更容易些。
考研英语全程班或联报班的学员都有机会学习新东方名师姜丽蓉考前高分必读班，包括作文班、翻译班。详解考研英语主观题答题模式，让你迅速攻克主观题，提高成绩。
下面是本次作文批改的题目以及考研教研员对学员的作文批改范例，是从学员作文中经常出现的1、词汇错误2、语法错误3、句式错误4、主题立意5、篇章结构 等方面进行的批改。
2008年考研英语写作真题
Directions:
Write an essay of 160~200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments。
第二篇：
Directions:
You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your rommate always has friends visiting。
Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons。
老师给的批改如下：
Collaboration
Collaboration is of the utmost importance to be human beings.Everybody not only needs chacrect [e1] individual character ,but also demands collaboration 。
As is described in the picture , Though two man who both lost legs that right and left, [e2] they are running to cooperate [e3] each other. Colla...
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一、分词用于首段描图
考研英语大作文的文字规定部分明确给出要求，首段必须对图画或图表的内容进行描写阐释，分词结构的运用主要是对图画或图表的具体细节进行修饰补充。在句子中若有一个主体，多个动作时，可以用分词做状语;若遇到简单的动词结构做修饰语时，可以用分词做定语。
例1：两名游客在船上边吃边聊，扔了许多垃圾到湖里。
分词结构做状语。句子的主干是“两名游客边吃边聊”，是一个“主—谓”结构。“在船上”做地点状语。“扔了许多垃圾到湖里”做伴随状语。
主干可译为two visitors are chatting and eating。“扔了许多垃圾到湖里”是句子的主语做的另外一个动作，所以可以译为伴随状语，即throwing various garbages into the lake。
Two visitors are chatting and eating on a boat, throwing various garbages into the lake.
例2：火锅中有很多被煮的文化元素。
分词结构做定语。句子主干是“火锅中有许多文化元素”，是一个There be结构。“被煮的”做“文化元素”的定语。
主干可利用there be句型翻译为“there are many cultural elements in the hot pot”。“文化元素”的修饰语中包含一个动词“煮”，与“文化元素”是被动关系，实际上是动词结构做定语，可译为分词被动结构。
There are many cultural elements being boiled in the hot pot.
二、分词做状语用于论述
分词结构做状语时，可以表现出与句子主干之间的逻辑关系，比如说明原因、阐述结果等，与其用其他句子来表述，不如用分词更为简洁明了。
例1：孩子被父母宠坏了，从来没有机会了解苦难是什么。
过去分词做状语表原因。句子的主干是“孩子没有机会”，是“主—谓—宾”结构。“被父母宠坏了”从逻辑上来说是主干的原因。“了解苦难是什么”补充说明没有机会做的具体内容。
“被父母宠坏了”说明的是原因，可以译为分词结构spoiled by their parents。“有机会做某事”译为have a chance to do。“了解苦难是什么”可以拆分为“了解”和“苦难是什么”，是动词加上一个宾语从句，译为learn what hardship means。
Spoiled by their parents, children can never have a chance to learn what hardship means.
例2：考虑到问题的严重性，我们必须马上采取有效措施。
现在分词做状语表原因。句...
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一、词汇
词汇的优化方法主要有两种，一个是替换法，一个是修饰法。
1. 替换法。比如同学们都很爱用的I think可以替换成I believe/hold/insist/maintain/assume;many可以替换成numerous/countless/innumerable/considerable/a sea of/a multitude of;because可以替换成since,as,in that;now that,considering/because of/owing to/due to/on account of/given+名词;
2. 修饰法。我们常常用形容词来修饰名词，副词来修饰动词。比如说我们在进行图画描述时，常说The picture describes that......经过修饰可以转化为The vivid/clear/accurate picture describes that......或者The picture vividly/clearly/accurately describes that.......
二、句式
1. 同学们想一想“这是一个普遍的现象”怎么翻译成英文呢?有同学第一反应就是This is a common phenomenon.这里的common就是个地摊词，既没水平又没档次。有少量同学却可以写出这样的句子：This is not an uncommon phenomenon.双重否定表示肯定。虽然这两个表达都很简单但是他们又有很明显的差异，各位同学在写作方面要做到的就是让自己的作文语言和别人的有这种差异。
2. 再比如，图画作文中必然会写到的一句话：“这幅图描述了。。。。。。”，大家会怎么写呢?
(1)In the picture,.......
(2)The picture describes that.......
(3)It is describes in the picture that.......
(4)As is describes in the picture,.......
从以上的例子大家可以发现，英语句式的变化方式是很多的，这只是冰山一角。到此，相信大家对词汇和句式的多变已有所了解。要想做到语言的多样性，同学们需要具备扎实的英语基础，即丰富的词汇以及完善的语法。因此，同学们再准备作文之前，一定要夯实基本功，并在学习完型、阅读、翻译的同时积累考研试题中频繁出现的句式和词组，这都是非常地道的一手素材。夯实基础后，同学们就要针对写作考研试题的考查规律和考查要求进行专门的研究、总结和准备了。务必在对考研试题进行充分研究的基础上，形成个人的写作套路和模板，这也是我们考研英语写作复习的主要内容。希望以上的内容能让同学们有所收获!
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2021考研英语：备考作文句子怎么润色?
一、如何将短句变长
考研作文特别强调句式多样，句子长短错落有致，为了做到这一点，我们可以通过分词、从句、介词或形容词词组等形式将若干简单句整合为长句，这样不仅能使句与句之间的联系更加紧密，而且还能增强整篇文章的逻辑性和连贯性。
我们可以先用几个简单句来描述图中的现象：
(1) A father is sitting on the ground.
(2) He is surrounded by his three sons and one daughter.
(3) They guard the net like a goalkeeper.
(4) They have kicked him back and forth like a football.
接下来我们需要将这几个简单句整合为一个复合句。先确定最核心的成分，写出主句：
In the picture we can see a father sitting on the ground.
接下来再根据逻辑关系将第二句接上：
In the picture we can see a father sitting on the ground, surrounded by his three sons and one daughter.
使用定语从句接上第三句和第四句：
In the picture we can see a father sitting on the ground, surrounded by his three sons and one daughter who guard the net like a goalkeeper and who have kicked him back and forth like a football.
最后再加上其他的修饰成分，比如可以用elderly来修饰父亲，用forlornly来形容父亲孤零零地坐在地上的状态，同时对句子进行微调：like a goalkeeper与like a football用法有点重复，可以考虑将like a football改为as if he were a football，最后得到的句子是：
In the picture we can see an elderly father sitting forlornly on the ground, surrounded by his three sons and one daughter who guard the net like a goalkeeper and who have kicked him back and forth as if he were a football.
在图画作文开头描述画面时可以考虑采用这种方法对普通句进行整合，但在整...
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2021考研复试：英语口语模板(6)
Good morning. I am very glad to be here for this interview.
First let me introduce myself. My name is __姓名__, and my English name is __英文名__. I've finished my undergraduate education in __本科院校__ University, Majoring in __本科专业__.
I am open-minded, willing and have broad interests like __兴趣1__, __兴趣2__ and especially in __你的专业技能1__. For example, during the past four years, I have accomplished __你的小作品__: one is ____, and the other is ____. Furthermore, I am interested in __你的专业技能2__. In __时间__, I finished my graduate project with __你的大作品__, which was __一句话描述这个东西__.
Although I have broad interests in many aspects and grasp the essential knowledge of the major, but I think at present, I can do many things in a superficial level, but not be competent to do things professionally owing to lack of ample knowledge and ability. So I think further study is still urgent for me to realize self-value.
The major that I hope pursue for my further education is __目标专业__. Because I find __你专业出来是做什么的这里就写什么__ are playing a more and more important role in our modern society. And nowadays in China, with the recognition by the government, our domestic __你专业出来是做什么的这里就写什么__ industry is growing rapidly and that may provide a lot of chances to us.
I plan to concentrate on study and research in this...
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2014考研已成过去式，对于坚持拼搏的人来说：梦想终将照进现实;对于浑浑噩噩的人来说，现实绝对不是白日梦那般简单!一份耕耘一份收获，这句真理又一次得到印证!
“考研”经过多年的改进和完善，题型和难易程度的变化都被控制在一个合理的范围之内。2014考研的总体难度，无论是英语(一)还是英语(二)都是相对偏容易的。文都教育高端教研中心分析认为：今年的考研英语真题作文的几个特点，预示着2015考研作文复习的风向需要作出调整和转变。
◎2014英语(一)小作文：
Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition.
文都高端点评：“让你写一封信给你的大学校长，建议改善学生们的身体状况”。这是一封建议信，建议信是小作文考察的最多的一种形式，今年会考到也在我们的预测范围内。健康话题是2014考前的热点预测话题，很多人都没想到会结合到小作文里考。足以看出，出题人在选择话题时相当灵活，形式与内容分开考虑，结合运用!
◎2014英语(一)大作文：
文都高端点评：2014大作文的话题是开放式的，孝敬父母，养老，传统美德，亲情，感恩，等等，任选一个角度去阐述都是可以的。多以不需要太担心会写跑偏，大作文的设题一定是让大多数考生都能写、会写，所以只要你平时做好了练习，并且有相当写作语言的储备，一定可以拿到一个不错的分数!可以肯定，大作文的话题设定一般是普遍的宽泛的话题，背诵一些常用句型和写作词汇是非常非常有必要的，例如文都高端课上所讲的：
1.人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed that…
2.引起了广泛的公众关注 Sth. has aroused wide public concern. / Sth has drawn great public attention.
3.责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility / achievement
4.经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden
5.做出共同努力 make joint efforts
6. 对……有益 be beneficial to / be conducive to…
7. 为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society
8.不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty
9. 满足需求 satisfy / meet the needs of...
10.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ide...
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随着中考临近，考生都进入了紧张的备考状态，老师们也一直与同学们并肩作战。在最后不到60天的时间里，如何让考生更有针对性的复习，如何让考生尽可能多得分是我们老师一直在思考的问题。
中考英语的基础部分只要学生基础扎实，一般拿分没多大问题。如今，令大部分学生头疼的问题是作文。为了让学生对中考英语作文更有信心，老师为同学们解析历年的中考英语作文题目，并作出预测，为同学们指点迷津。
首先让我们一起来看看历年的中考英语作文真题。
2006年作文题目：
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “I Have a Dream”.
2007年作文题目：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Things I Hate to Do”.
2008年作文题目：
Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Story about My Parent(s)”.
2009年作文题目：
Write at least 60 words about the topic "I want to do something for my school"
2010年作文题目：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m proud of myself"
2011年作文题目：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m a member of… "
我们可以发现，中考的英语作文其实难度并不大。命题都是与学生自身相关，为的是让学生有话可说。但是学生往往得不到高分，到底我们该如何去拿分呢?从以上题目可以看出，中考作文的写作思路通常为：what—why—how。评卷主要从内容、结构、文采三个角度给予评分。学生在写作文时，最好能够根据提示进行书写以得内容分，另外，注意连接词的使用以得结构分，同时注意遣词造句以得文采分。现在我们一起来分析2009年真题的优秀作文，让同学们更能感受到如何去写一篇优秀作文。
If you ask me what I want to do for my school, my answer is to plant trees in my school garden. I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful. After I plant trees there, maybe more and more students will do as me.Moreover, students can read under the trees. Of course, I will do it with my classmates. I hope our school will be a nicer place to study.
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一、关注时事
H1N1流感
★ 范文01.
根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文.所给英文提示词语供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.
世界上已有许多国家发现了新型H1N1流感病毒(H1N1 flu virus)病例.据了解，人感染该病毒后会出现咳嗽、发烧、疲劳等症状.为了加强同学们的预防意识，(21世纪中学生英语报>正在举办征文活动，请你给该报投稿，描述感染该病毒的症状并谈一谈为了预防该病毒我们该怎么做，最后表达我们能战胜病毒的信心.提示词：cough, have a fever, feel tired, prevent, wash, exercise, sleep, believe
Nowadays, many countries in the world have found cases of the new H1N1 flu virus. It’s said that people with H1N1 flu virus will cough, have a fever and feel tired. To prevent the virus, we can do many things. Firstly, we’d better not go to places where there are many people. Secondly, we need to wash our hands often with soap and water, especially after we cough or sneeze. It's also a good habit for us to exercise regularly. It can not only help us keep fit but also improve our health against illness. And having a good sleep is important, too. People who are tired or under stress can get sick easily. And then, eat more fruit and vegetable to keep ourselves fit and strong. Last but not least, open the window and keep the air in the room fresh. If we all do these things, we will prevent the virus. So there is no need to be worried. I believe we will win through in the end.
上海世博会
★ 范文02.
上海世博会对中国的影响
As we all know that 2010 World Expo will be held in Shanghai , this is the first time that China hosted the World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. ...
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