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NO.1
In the past, people were friendlier than they are today.
【点睛】：
【题目大意】：与现在的人们相比，过去的人们更加友好。此题为古今对比题目，上过强化课的同学应该知道，古今对比的题目论证段一定要进行段内比较，而且有常见的几个思考方向：科学水平，生活节奏，人们观念，社会体制等。波波老师建议大家选择同意，原因是人们生活节奏加快和社会竞争变得激烈。
【具体思路如下】：
1. 生活节奏加快，人们相处的时间变得极为有限，所以人们变得更加冷漠了。
With the acceleration of life pace, the time when people can interact with others has been squeezed to a limited amount so that they become more indifferent to others’ business.
论据：
The above logic is particularly true of students today. As we know, the increasingly heavy study burden has dramatically decreased the leisure time of students. To be specific, students nowadays are also immersed in various assignments, like group project, quiz and so on. According to a survey conducted by Education Ministry of China, the time students spent on learning in 2014 was more than 8 hours per day, while this figure in 1994 was only 6 hours every day. The great difference in the two figures clearly demonstrate that student’s study time has increased a lot, which in turn decreased their free time. And less free time means that students have less chances to communicate with others and thus become less hospitable.
2. 竞争变得激烈，人人都是竞争对手，所以人们不如过去友好了。
Under the increasingly fierce competition in many areas, people become rivalry to each oth...
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托福独立写作话题
①成功类话题：In order to achieve success， we must be more like others than be different from others.
②工作类话题：People should take a secure job immediately when finding one instead of waiting for the job that they find more satisfying.
③金钱类话题：Most businesspeople are motivated by the desire for money.
④科技类话题：Telephone has had greater effects on people’s lives than TV.
⑤教育类话题：To improve the quality of education， universities should spend more money on professors’ salaries.
⑥朋友类话题：Getting advice from friends who are older than you is better than getting advice from friends who are of the same age as yours.
⑦环境类话题：Most of the environmental issues are too complicated today. Individuals cannot do anything about them.
⑧政府类话题：The most important thing that the government can do in improving health care is to clean the environment.
⑨媒体类话题：Advertising is a waste of time and money because customers already know what they want.
⑩动物类话题：More and more people are spending money on their pets， even though there can be other good ways to spend money.
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To conclude, the argument is not persuasive as it stands. Before we accept the conclusion, the arguer must present more facts that_____. To solidify the argument, the arguer would have to produce more evidence concerning____.
As it stands, the argument is not well reasoned. To make it logically acceptable, the arguer would have to demonstrate that ____. Additionally, the arguer must provide evidence to _____.
To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the arguer maintains. To strengthen the argument the arguer would have to provide more evidence concerning that_____.
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Nowadays, important qualities needed to become successful have received attention from college graduates. The relative importance of human interaction and hard working in school has been an important issues of successes in tomorrow's jobs. Some people tend to think that the former looks more essential compared with the latter. I fully agree with them. My arguments are shown below.
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