留学群托福写作病句改正

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托福写作常见病句及改正

 

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  托福写作常见病句及改正

  1. I am not good at maths, but English

  改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.

  2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?

  改进: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?

  3.It is children who clear about their interests.

  改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.

  4. I agree the latter idea.(漏掉介词是大家在托福写作中低分的常见病句。)

  改进: I agree with the latter idea.

  5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.

  改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.

  6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.

  改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.

  7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.(语义重复也是大家在托福写作中导致低分的主要原因)

  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

  8. No one knows all the things.

  改进: No one knows everything.

  9. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

  10. Each form of shavings friends has its advantages.

  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.