留学群专题频道独立写作栏目,提供与独立写作相关的所有资讯,希望我们所做的能让您感到满意! 独立写作是新的托福考试中最后一道写作题目的名称。
托福写作考试的一大重点部分,托福独立写作需要的字数是多少?这就随留学群来看看托福写作考试的字数要求。
一、托福写作字数
最适宜的综合写作字数区间:240-300字
为什么说是最适宜呢?因为这个区间,极容易出满分;为什么容易出满分呢?因为没有特别多思维的限制。不需要大家去过度的考虑节省文字,也不需要大家过度的考虑填充文字。大家只要用熟自己的综合写作模板,做好对于听力和阅读内容的总结和适当填写,基本上字数就落到了这个区间里。如果超出,说明细节写多了(这个是会扣分的,毕竟人家是summary essay要 sum up);如果不足,说明要么模板太简单,要么内容不充分。
独立写作中,字数是否重要?
关于独立写作的字数规范,到现在也没有一个普遍认可的标度。出现这样的认知差异,归根到底是起源于独立写作发散的创作本质。这跟高考作文字数有标准,但遵守不严格是一个道理。创作得当、文笔突出、内涵丰富的文章,不会让字数成为其拦路虎。字数的规则也正是这些深层写作能力的最直接和简单的衡量标准。但它并不绝对,只是具有相对普遍性。
独立写作中,最低字数是?
320字,是大多数人较为充足的展现四段式结构的最低字数。托福写作中最基础的要求就是一个正确的、发展相对充分的结构。从操作来看,320字是大多数人完成四段写作的最低字数。开头及结尾50字,中间段落110字。开头结尾三句话,中间段落6句话,基本可以包括每种段落的所有表达部分。
二、托福写作评分
1、切题
在托福写作中,考生所表达的观点要和题目要求相关和一致。在行文过程中,不断重复题干关键词。 写作时题目中的topic词汇一定要在文章中出现,除此之外,在写作时我们也要主要重复题目中的topics,以避免被机器判为跑题; 一旦判定文章为跑题文章,就很可能会直接判为零分。写作时要清楚写出表达观点的主题句,以及主体段的主题句。
2、结构完整合理展开
托福满分作文的行文组织要系统,具有明确的逻辑性。字数保持在600字以上,才能考出28分以上的分数。 文章一般采用5段式的结构,即:开头、观点段1、观点段2、让步段、结尾。要有3个分论点,以及相关的例证来支持自己的论点,即例子、细节(说理或例证)。细节一般指的是数字,或是以大写字母开头的专有名词。
三、托福写作怎么拿高分
1、内容完整准确。
一般情况下,讲座中信息都会有三点,需要看考生是否有将讲座中的关键信息点完整、准确地提炼出来(用自己的语言表达),另外,还需要和阅读材料的相关内容有效地一一对应。如果讲座中的信息点有缺失,那么会有一定程度的扣分;如果只写了有关阅读材料的观点,得1分。
2、文章组织机构如何,词汇和语法应用是否正确
条理清晰,结构连贯,用词恰当是高分作文的必要条件,考生要确保能够准确表达讲座中的观点与阅读材料中的观点是如何相...
很多同学都没有参加过托福考试,都是第一次参加托福考试,对于托福考试要考什么内容,大家是不知道的,下面是留学群为大家分享的8月22日托福独立写作预测题。
2021年8月22日托福独立写作预测题
1. Which of the following summer arrangements is better for a 16-17 year old student of grade eleven?
a.Get ready for some of the major courses they want to study in College;b.Led by the teacher to visit museums or historical sites, and then write paper.
2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Universities should require every graduation students to take public speaking courses. Give specific examples and details to support your answer.
3. Which one do you think is the most important for high school teacher? (age from 15 to 18)
a.the ability to give students advice to plan for their future;b.the ability to find which students need help and provide them with help;c.the ability to encourage students to learn on themselves outside of the classroom.
4. Which area the government should fund to improve children’s education?a.hiring more teachers to teach in a small class;b.preschool education before kindergarten;c.providing some training courses so that teachers can be more professional.
5. If you are going to graduate from the university and have to choose the final course, which professor will you choose?The one you used to sign up for courses or the one you have never learned from before?
6. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement...
托福写作对于很多考生来说有一定的难度,托福写作分为综合写作和独立写作,那么托福写作评分标准是什么呢?来跟留学群的小编来看看以下内容的介绍吧!
一、托福写作评分标准
托福写作5分作文:文章切题,阐说充分,文章有说服力;段落组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,有很强的逻辑性;段落内句与句连接顺畅,句式使用恰当,灵活,娴熟;用词确切,得体。文章中有个别语法拼写错误,但不影响内容表达。
托福写作4分作文:文章切题,阐说基本充分,在某些细节上有缺陷。段落层次组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,逻辑性强;句间连接顺畅,句式使用恰当,灵活;用词基本得体。文章中有少量用词不当和语法拼写错误。
托福写作3分作文:文章切题,阐说尚可,展开不够。段落层次组织有序,衔接紧密,过渡自然,有逻辑性;句间连接基本顺畅;有部分句法错误;用词一般,有时不得体。词性区分和拼写等有若干错误。
托福写作2分作文:文章切题,段落组织基本合理,有逻辑性,但只存在于语义层次上,语言表达上未能体现;句子框架结构基本成立,但有许多语法错误,句间联系不顺畅,往往是不善于使用逻辑连词,显得幼稚,生硬。词汇方面拼写错误多,常有用词不得体现象。
托福写作1分作文:文章切题。阐说没有展开,只限于三言两语地回答问题;没有段落组织,很乱,长度很短,只有一段;句子排列有一定的逻辑关系,能看出各句基本框架,但结构或语法错误较多;用词不得体,拼写错误多。
托福写作0分作文:文章各方面都有严重错误,句子不像句子。总体印象是根本没有写作能力,英语水平太低,达不到一分标准,只能打最低分。
二、托福写作考试技巧
学会Paraphrase
综合写作备考的过程中,需要掌握paraphrase的技巧。如果有同学不理解paraphrase的话,我简单介绍一下,paraphrase其实就是指意义,通俗地讲就是“换句话说”。这种能力在综合写作中非常重要,因为综合写作要根据听力和阅读来写文章,但是却不能用原文的内容。独立写作中,我们要再开头重复问题时也要用paraphrase,不能照抄。所以大家在平时练习中要掌握这个技能。
综合写作一定要听懂听力材料
为什么强调听力材料的种重要性,因为考试的要求是总结听力材料中的观点。虽然要针对阅读材料来论述,但是阅读材料在听力音频结束后还会再次出现。综合写作要将全部的注意力都集中在听力材料上,记录下来要点,不要遗漏(漏掉观点会扣分)。
独立写作不要急着写
托福写作考试时间相对不那么紧张,写作时间一共有30分钟,所以要先预留出思考的时间。这个环节叫做prewriting,prewriting阶段你要做的就是思考,让大脑飞速转动,写下你脑子中和标题相关的一切内容,随后根据这些列出文章的大纲,接着将其丰满成一篇文章。有大纲,你的写作就有层次,不会像无头苍蝇一样想到什么写什么。所以,写作之前不要吝啬这点“头脑风暴”的时间。
三、托福写作考试时间
通常托福写作考试是接在托福口语考试以后,...
托福写作的独立部分,往往是比较在意考生的写作内容,所以有的学生在这部分拿不到高分基本都是因为内容方面存在问题,比如说作文中的论述逻辑。下面留学群就给大家讲讲如何改善托福独立写作的逻辑论述?
一、如何改善托福独立写作的逻辑论述?
1、先列提纲再写文章
写作文之前列提纲是很好的习惯,但很多同学嫌麻烦或是为了节省时间都会跳过这个步骤,然而逻辑问题往往就是因为大家没列提纲理清楚写作思路所产生的。因此,小编希望大家在撰写独立写作的文章时,还是能够先把提纲给列好,至少整篇文章的观点,分论点,支持论据这些要先想清楚并且写在草稿上,至于具体的词汇语法句式则可以边写边加入。这么做既能避免文章跑题,在逻辑论述上也能更有条理,有效避免逻辑错误。
2、找别人看文章
想要改善逻辑问题,那么考生需要先能够发现问题才行。然而实际上大家想要找到自己平时写作文时存在的逻辑漏洞却并非易事。之所以逻辑问题不容易发现,原因在于考生自己往往是很难看出自身思维上的逻辑错误的。本来就是按照自己的想法思维来写的,大家理所当然地会觉得别人也能看懂,发现不了问题实属正常。而既然自己发现不了,那么最好的做法当然是找别人来看了。
有条件的考生可以直接找托福写作方面的老师或者擅长英语写作的朋友来替你看文章,没有条件的也可以尝试通过托福考试群等在线方式找人来看自己的作文。看文章的要求不需要很高,只要让别人看看有没有逻辑上的问题。也许你发现不了的逻辑错误别人一眼就能看出来。通过这种方式来寻找自身作文的逻辑问题并加以改善,也是相当不错的做法。
3、用好逻辑关系词
最后一个提升写作逻辑的做法就是用好逻辑关系词。托福写作中的逻辑关系很多,并列、因果、转折、递进、让步等等,各有各的对应逻辑关系词,小编在这里给大家留个作业,希望各位同学自己去把常用的表示各类逻辑关系的词汇分门别类的归纳汇总起来,然后尝试在自己的文章中用好这些关系词。这就好比给本来昏暗的房子里装上了照明灯一样,不仅自己能把逻辑关系展现出来,也能让考官看得更明白。
二、托福写作如何提升文章逻辑
托福写作让步段写法步骤:写出反方观点
这一步大多数同学都做得不错,但是在提出反方观点之前,可再加上一些连接词,例如admittedly, nevertheless等等。还拿之前拿到题目做例子,For further career success, is relate well to other people more important than studying hard at school? 总观点是同意,让步段写学习好也挺重要的。第一步引出反方观点时,应写:Admittedly, acquiring an excellent GPA is one significant proof of your ability, for "study" is one of the major tasks that students are supposed to fulfill in school.
托福写作让步段写法步骤...
6月的托福考试也即将要开始,在6月5日便有一次托福考试。如果学生们计划在5号去考托福的,可以先到留学群来看看本次考试的真题预测,好确定自己重点该放在哪些方面。那么就来看看托福考试6月05号的独立写作的题目预测吧。
一、独立写作题目
180127CN (new)
Which one do you think is the most important factor for a student to success college or university?
1.Tutors in university
2.The encouragement from family and friends
3.High-quality education from high school
161210CN (new)
Do you agree or disagree:
It is better to travel abroad to visit different countries when you are younger rather than when you are older.
180916CN (new)
Nowadays, people are busy with many things. If you were given a short period of time, what would you choose :
1. Learn to play a new sport you never played;
2. Learn to cook food in a different way;
3. Learn to do some hand-made work like clothes
171028CN (new)
Many filmmakers made movie based on books. When a movie is produced based on books, some people prefer to read books before watching films, other people choose to watch movie first. What do you think?
191201CN
If you are required to give feedbacks about your classmates/colleagues, would you like to give positive comments or negative comments first?
200104CN
Should teachers assign homework that students must do everyday?
180113CN
Do you agree or disagree with the follo...
托福写作部分有许多学生都不知道怎么备考才能有更好的效果,其实学生们去了解写作部分的真题对于备考也是有帮助的。那么留学群下面就给大家带了2021年5月15日托福独立写作题目预测,来看看这些题目吧。
一、托福独立写作题目预测
1.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Drivers should pay a fee for driving in busy city streets when there is the greatest heavy traffic.
2.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Movies and television programs should present stories that good people should be rewarded and bad people should be punished.
3.Some people believe that children from 5 to 10 should take one hour-long class and then have a rest or play some games, while others say that they should take longer classes and have a full rest at noon to increase the time they can focus. Which one do you prefer?
4.People are required to give feedback about classmates in school or colleagues at work. Someone would like to give positive feedback first and then give negative feedback, while others would like to give negative feedback and then give positive feedback. Which one would you prefer?
5.What is the most effective action for individuals to improve environment?
1)Walking and bicycling instead of driving private cars to work or school;
2)Recycling or reusing objects instead of throwing them in trash;
3)Buying locally grown organic products.
6.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rapid ...
托福写作分为独立写作和综合写作,对于独立写作很多同学不知道要怎么备考,留学群下面为大家分享了2021年5月8日托福独立写作题目预测,大家可以参考一下。
一、托福独立写作题目预测
1. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rapid growth of cities in today's world is mostly a positive development for society.
2.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People today are more interested in improving their neighborhood than in the past.
3.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how well their students perform.
4.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Schools should do a better job in educating students how to eat healthfully instead taking it as the responsibility of their parents alone.
5.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers today are not as respected as they were in the past.
6.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only movies and television shows in which good people are rewarded and bad people are punished are worth watching.
7.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science, language and history.
8.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Patience is usually not a good thing and we need to take action at once.
9.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way for a company t...
在托福的写作备考中,除了积累词汇和句子之外,还要阅读一些优秀的范文,这对于我们在考托福写作的时候非常有用,留学群分享了托福独立写作题目及范文。
托福独立写作话题
①成功类话题:In order to achieve success, we must be more like others than be different from others.
②工作类话题:People should take a secure job immediately when finding one instead of waiting for the job that they find more satisfying.
③金钱类话题:Most businesspeople are motivated by the desire for money.
④科技类话题:Telephone has had greater effects on people’s lives than TV.
⑤教育类话题:To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on professors’ salaries.
⑥朋友类话题:Getting advice from friends who are older than you is better than getting advice from friends who are of the same age as yours.
⑦环境类话题:Most of the environmental issues are too complicated today. Individuals cannot do anything about them.
⑧政府类话题:The most important thing that the government can do in improving health care is to clean the environment.
⑨媒体类话题:Advertising is a waste of time and money because customers already know what they want.
⑩动物类话题:More and more people are spending money on their pets, even though there can be other good ways to spend money.
托福独立写作范文
过去的100年,你认为在你们国家最有贡献的发明是什么?
What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to suppor...
托福写作水平的提升要从具体的实例来训练,还在备考托福考试的同学,可以了解一下托福考试的真题预测,下面是留学群带来的2021年4月24日托福独立写作真题预测与范文。
2021年4月24日托福独立写作真题预测
诚实说话
Agree or disagree: People should state their honest opinions even though they know others will disagree with their views.
2021年4月24日托福独立写作范文
It is undeniable that people may have different opinions about same things, and there exists the perception that it is recommendable for people to state their honest opinions even if they know others may oppose their views. Personally, I mostly agree with this point of view.
First, expressing one's idea honestly can let others know what you really want. People are not mind readers and if you says don't speak out your true thoughts, they will never know. For instance, I want to eat out with my friends. I want to eat sushi but my friends may want to eat dumplings. If I don't say anything about whatI want and just go with the groups, they will assume
that I like to eat dumplings. But, actually, I doesn't. So, by speaking honest, my friends will eventually indulge my thoughts even if this time they won't.
Second, showing one's idea directly to others will give others the chance to point out why you are wrong. Sometimes what we believe is not right and we need guidance from others. For example,an news triggered a heated debate among netizens. The news says a thief called the p...
托福的写作部分的考试对学生的语言组织能力有很高的要求,托福的写作有独立写作和综合写作,那么独立写作的评分标准有哪些呢?来留学群看看介绍吧!
一、托福独立写作评分标准
1. 切题
面对多样的独立写作出题,同学们一定要把握核心的审题视角,从“建议行为类”“现象事实”2类经典题型出发,发散式地把握“绝对类”“对比类”“逻辑关系类”等题型的立论方法;另一方面,很多考生在论证展开时所采用的论据,比较容易出现跟主题关联性不大的情况,即局部答非所问的现象,从而影响了得分。
2. 结构
例证法:选用一些“经历”“事实”进行合理地分析展开。
细节分析法:“例子不够,细节来凑”。同学们一定有过没有例子可举的情况,那么,这时候就应该应用“总——分”思维,对主题句或者理论部分进行层层具像化地分析,所谓 “细节尽头显真实”。尽头很难达到,但同学们可以努力对分论点进行至少2~3层的递进分析,分论点的合理性必会有所提升。
排比举例:分论点概念太宽泛? 同学们可以采用列举平行的2~4个例子分别展开,保持列举时时句式的相似性,加强气势和论证效果。
对比法:论证的“灵丹妙药”,玩转“非正面对比”和“正面对比”。
因果法:明确推论的起点和终点,在推论时“动之以情,晓之以理”,结合案例细节开展连续性的归纳论证,并使用归纳性的逻辑联结词串联层层递推的内容,使得段落论证有力,逻辑连贯。
3. 连贯
内容连贯一致的文章通常全文围绕中心论点展开,而不会论据自相矛盾,也不会重复论证,有时候通过一些表示因果、先后、递进的关系连词可以起到粘合剂段落的作用,加强文章的整体性和连贯性。
4. 语言
托福考试终究是语言考试,最终还是要考查考生的语言运用能力,但是要注意的是,并不是要求考生通篇都用难词偏语长句,而是要会变化着用一些美国人常用的语句把自己的想法表达清楚,所以建议考生尽量多阅读native speaker创作的议论文/范文和模仿英文原版材料,这样写出来的文章才能够原汁原味。
二、托福写作范文运用方法
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托福写作范文的重要性可以按照其分数来分辨,一般来说,范文中4分和5分的文章是最有价值的,因为能够达到这个分数水平的文章已经是达到了很高水平的文章。对于这些文章大家就不能只是简单的熟读和背诵了,而是需要逐字逐句分析体会作者的写作思路及修辞用法。
范文多看才能跟上写作思路
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看范文也要结合练习自我批改
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