2013年雅思考试：ielts原作文写作的批改
何钢在原作文上的详细批改(括号为不妥之处，注释为修改)： In reality, a large number(1) of money have(2) been funded(3) on the development of human population in order to enhance the living standand(4). Although government(5) and animal lovers have started to assist in conservation of animals, lacking of money and social awareness is still a key problem of animal conservation program(6). Now people should care and pay more for animals rather than living in luxury.(7) Government(8) have put certain fund on wild animals, while a few part of them was spent on prot... [ 查看全文 ]2013年雅思考试：ielts原作文写作的批改的相关文章
