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2014考研英语作文热门话题范文：过劳死
From the picture we can see a young father died on the patient bed for the sake of(建议改为because of，for the sake of一般用来表示“为了”，后常接目的状语) overwork and his wife is crying and mourning for him with extreme sadness,so it is with their child(改为so does their child).What a shocked scene and how thought provoking the phenomenon that the picture insinuates.What the picture intends to convey is the significance of the awareness of health.With the development of society,people commence to ...
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2014考研英语作文热门话题范文：赡养父母
As is depicted in the picture,a poor old man,rolling like a football,is kicked between(改为among，注意between和among的区别，between表示在两者之间...[ 查看全文 ]
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2014考研英语作文热门话题范文：招聘歧视
The undergraduate, who is on his way to a job interview, is stunned after hearing a ridiculous condition: the position is only f...[ 查看全文 ]
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2014考研英语作文热门话题范文：志愿者
From the picture above we can see that there are three trees in the picture, and one of them is growing very strongly.(用一般现在时，且st...[ 查看全文 ]
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2014考研英语作文热门话题范文：如此承诺
AS Is(注意大小写) shown above,a funny hen claimed that her eggs with(that后面应该跟的是从句，从句中应包含谓语动词，建议将with改为have) no edge and the like whi...[ 查看全文 ]
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2014考研英语作文热门话题范文：放手去爱
From the picture above we can see that there are three trees in the picture, and one of them is growing very strongly.(用一般现在时，且s...[ 查看全文 ]
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2014考研英语作文热门话题范文：文化交流
In the far-reaching picture, a (an)emperor is served with coffee by a eunuch who is holding a tray on his head and saying”Your m...[ 查看全文 ]
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As is vividly depicted in the picture, a father has received a letter from his son, on which without anything except(改为but)a word: money. It reveals a...[ 查看全文 ]
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In the picture,there is an unbalanced(改为imbalanced，imbalance表示“失衡，不平衡”，而unbalance表示“[力]失衡，精神错乱”) seesaw on which the one side sitting a woman with her...[ 查看全文 ]
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As is shown in the picture the humans (加who are)divided alone keep contact with each other by internet. Every one owns a computer ,which is their main...[ 查看全文 ]
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This cartoon meeting our eyes is very worrying and thought-provoking, in which a not harmonious scene is depicted vividly . As we can see, an p...[ 查看全文 ]
