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2014考研英语作文热门话题范文：因材施教
The duck mother, who is anxious and energetic, is begging the monkey teacher to teach her children the approach of climbing tree, which give(改为gives) him a fright. Conspicuously, that is a delicious(用词不当，delicious一般用来形容美食，故应去掉)ironic(改为an ironic)depiction concerning blind education,(加and，句子之间用连词连接)a phenomenon (句子缺谓语，加is)pervasive in contemporary society.This overwhelming, occupy with various kinds of irrational behaviors over children(句子表意不清，建议改为This overwhelmingly vario...
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