2012中考英语作文点评
请以“Our Class Meeting”为题,写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。 Our Class Meeting 我们的班会 Last Friday afternoon we had our last class meeting in our classroom. All the students and our class teacher took part in it. 上周五下午,我们在教室举行了最后一次班会。班上的所有同学和班主任都参加了。 We held a warm discussion about our future life. Each of us spoke at the meeting actively. After the discussion, we all decided to study hard so as to make our life better and better. 我们热烈讨论了今后的生活,每个人都在会上积极发言。讨论完后我们都下定决心好好学习,让我们的生活更加美好。 点评:这篇文章条理清楚,记叙完整,短短的五句话有简单句,也有复合句,交代了时间、地点、人物、原因、经过、结果六要素。 常用的叙事句型有: It too... [ 查看全文 ]2012中考英语作文点评的相关文章