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不一致(Disagreements)
所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等。
例1. When one have money ，he can do what he want to 。
(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么。)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。
改为：Once one has money ，he can do what he wants (to do)
句子不完整(Sentence Fragments)
在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解。可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生。
例1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ，radio ，newspaper and so on 。
剖析：本句后半部分“for example by TV ，radio ，newspaper and so on 。”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯...
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